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thank you for the advice. it is hard to find a balance between realism and fantasy. you advice will help me a lot EDIT: i know this is REALLY REALLY ...

T_T more masculine T_T since my first draft was so bad, that i couldn't get too many changes at once without accidentally changing the plot. this is my first work, ...

thank you. don't worry ^^ i know that not every work is liked by everyone, and there are always mistakes. the main thing is to get them out while keeping ...

well, read the chapter 1 (not edit). it would be impossible to say im not improving. it sucks. just plain sucks

you are. i didn't yell it out because it would be unnatural, which seems to be my main problem with my work. since this is my first own work, and ...

i always use anime emotes ^_^ anyway, great review. i did go a bit overboard with the explanation, didnt i? guess it is kinda like what happened in bleach, but ...

GRRRRR :twisted: im gunna hurt a reviewer!!! one of them told me that it was "weather" instead of "whether"!!!! oh well. thanks for the review :)

of course ill review for you :) here is what i am planning on doing soon with HSB: *re-edit chapter 2. dont expect as much changes, though. *Work on a ...

**reads through posts** ... 0_0 ... i love spoilers ^^ (im only on book 2)

ok, i wiill. i am planning on re-editing today and re-writing monday

**1/2 SPOILER** im getting more into the differences later **1/2 SPOILER DONE** thank you... maybe i shoud try writing when im awake? also, chapter two is up!!!

is it just me, or was it very easy to guess what was up with ed in the first 50 pages in twilight? ...maybe ive been reading too much chibi ...

thank you for your review. its much very hard to keep the cheesy factor down, but im still working on it, so i may be able turn it down more. ...

thank you for the review. i will try to get out the next chapter within the next 7 days, then ill go back and edit my first chapter. the next ...

thx everyone ^_^ i dont know why you posted twice, kaylyn, but thank you for such detales. this is my first piece of work, so i am still working on ...